Creating the Oral Cancer Save-A-Life Rap

I was driving to Boston up 95 listening to LL Cool J on the radio, and a line came into my head:

My name is Eva Grayzel
I gotta story to tell

That’s good, I thought. I turned off the radio and the rhyming lines kept coming. I had to keep pulling over to write them down!

I thought it was a canker sore, just wouldn’t go away.
I hurt and my dentist had nothing to say.
I told the oral surgeon this sore won’t quit.
It even gave me an earache. I was sick of it.
I was desperate for answers. I needed a solution.
But, all along I was living a delusion.
You ready for the DX, the diagnosis?
Stage 4 Oral Cancer….Holy Moses!


If a canker sore doesn’t go away
It could be oral cancer, catch it early, don’t delay
Hoarse voice, lump in neck, persistent cough
It could be oral cancer. Don’t shrug it off.

You’d think this disease is for those who smoke and drink.
But look at me, I’m not the type you’d think
would get this disease. But, I made it through the hoop
I’m lucky to speak, so I need to give ya’ll the scoop.
If a sore doesn’t heal within two weeks,
Go to a dentist, oral surgeon and let them take a peek.
Go to a practice that has current eduction
in oral cancer so they make the right evaluation.


I survived so that I could tell ya my story.
But, I’ll spare you all the details of my surgery so gory.
Keep pestering docs until the problem goes away
So you don’t go thru what I did – listen up – Hey!
Know the early signs when they check your tongue and more
The lips, cheeks, throat, palate, and the mouth floor.
Six-Step Screening tells you ‘what the heck is it?’
And what to expect at your next dental visit.


With a reconstructed tongue and ONE neck muscle to boot,
I can still rap and even break dance, what a hoot!
Oh ya don’t believe me…Hey, guys give me a beat.
This silver-haired woman can still turn on the heat.
(POP and BREAK dance)
Raise awareness. Shout it out.
Saving a life is what it’s all about.

I wanted to put it out to the world. So, I had a friend film it in a dental office….it was cute, but didn’t have the impact it could because I had no music track. I started doing it in interviews, and school shows, but once again, without the music it didn’t become what it could.

I started looking around for a rap artist to work with me. I made connections over the next year, but no one felt right. I wanted a clean, non-vulgar, artist who could help compose the track and give me some coaching, which my children insisted I needed. Through a local DJ, I found that guy in Gallo. Gallo was worth the wait and everything I was looking for.

After performing the rap with the track at lectures, I began to dream about having my own music video. What better way to get information to young people who are increasingly more at risk for oral cancer? I arranged to interview a recommended music video director Freddy Savage at the mall one day – and we hit it off. He got the message, the purpose, and my zaniness. Through Freddy, I met Blake and his dancers. Needing a location to film the video, I went to Nardi Studios where my daughter took dance as a child. Tammy Liiro, the owner, offered not only the space but her protege students. We picked a date, and whoever could make it was invited. Nothing like spontaneity! We pulled off the dancing part of the project in one day.

Freddy wanted the story to be told visually, too. I wanted my daughter Elena to play ‘young Eva’ but her school schedule didn’t allow for it. Krystal Yavorski stepped up to the plate. How did I find Krystal? Her Dad was repairing our roof and deck. Wanting to earn money, she was helping him out one day. When I heard a female voice, I had to stop my work to see who was on the crew. I needed a gardener, a house cleaner…and an actress! Krystal filled the bill.

Once it was edited, I held onto it. I didn’t want to release it to the world without a purpose a reason. If Michael Douglas was diagnosed after it’s creation, I would have jumped on the bandwagon with it. I waited two months during which time I asked some Foundations and companies if the video was something they would want to sponsor. No luck there. Then, COPING magazine decided to publish an article I submitted. With a readership of one-million, I knew the time was ripe.

In addition to that, I’m auditioning for America’s Got Talent in two weeks. If I’m talented enough to beat the competition, I may get some national exposure for the video, which will raise awareness and save lives. How amazing would that be? One project at a time. One day, one hour at a time. Slowly but surely, the world will know about the existence of oral cancer, a devastating disease that can steal everything you live for: eating, speaking, appearance… I hope to prevent that from happening! Help me by posting your comments and sharing the rap. Thank you readers!

By | 2016-10-14T15:18:18+00:00 November 1st, 2013|Making Life Meaningful, News, Oral Cancer, Storytelling, Survivorship|0 Comments

About the Author:

Nationally recognized Master Storyteller Eva Grayzel, shows her audiences how to bring new business strategies to life through the power of storytelling: compelling stories to communicate the company message, role-playing stories to build teams and human stories to generate passion.  An expert on interactive storytelling techniques with 25 years’ experience, Eva’s engaging keynotes, training workshops and corporate retreats are custom-tailored to your organization.  After surviving a shocking diagnosis of late stage tongue cancer, Eva broadened her audience base speaking about the patient’s experience.  When Eva starts speaking, audiences stop looking at the clock. Her powerful survivorship story and her professional training as a performer allows her to deliver mesmerizing programs, actively engaging each member of the audience professionally and personally.  Eva is the author of ‘You Are Not Alone: Families Touched By Cancer,’ and ‘Mr. C Plays Hide & Seek.’

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